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Comments from READER
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2005-04-05 06:56:44 | My time in hell Part 1 | quite ok. im german and i do not see the mistakes , so its good for me. 9points :P |
| 2005-04-05 11:56:35 | My time in hell Part 1 | some grammatical and typing mistakes; the end was to fast and not really fitting; on the whole not too bad; 5points -- keep it up :-) |
| 2005-05-09 23:51:01 | My time in hell Part 1 | loved it loved it loved it loved it she is so lucky i got all wet 10/10 |
| 2005-05-12 12:25:21 | My time in hell Part 1 | It got me soaking wet... |
| 2005-05-16 03:09:06 | My time in hell Part 1 | Well, aside from the utter lack of capitalization and a few spelling/grammar mistakes, it's pretty good. A strong build up, but the fucking was over way too fast. Definitely think about adding a lot more detail where the fucking in concerned. But overall, not bad. |