| 2006-03-26 00:58:37 |
My time in hell Part 1
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that was great please hurry with part 2 |
| 2005-03-30 22:27:34 |
Autumn pt. 4
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You know they'll rate this low, so don't worry. It's good transitional work. Flashback was nice, everything still moves along well. That sense of dread her father brings is intense! Take your time and the next part will be as excellent as the rest. It has been a genuine pleasure reading your material. I almost feel as if I know you a little. |
| 2005-03-30 22:39:17 |
Autumn pt. 4
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wtf ??? must be a real dumb ass writer to keep writing this bullshit, 1/10 |
| 2005-04-01 15:27:33 |
Autumn pt. 4
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Thanks for posting! As Anitbirch said, don't expect this to be rated very well, but you have fans like us! Keep writing, I am enjoying seeing what happens next, its a suspensefull story. |
| 2005-04-02 11:54:23 |
Autumn pt. 4
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Hi again thank god your still writing i was afraid you weren't going to write again. that would make me sad :( |