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Comments from READER
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2005-04-09 11:40:34 | Real Juicy Pussy | thats for that list. immature much? by the way, great story dude. i WANT PUSSSY NOW!!!!!! |
| 2005-04-10 00:58:42 | Real Juicy Pussy | now im horny |
| 2006-12-25 22:01:44 | Real Juicy Pussy | is everyone sure that that wasn't his sister? Good story, well written. 8/10 is fair. |
| 2005-04-07 16:18:31 | Forbidden Desires - Part 4 | 1st.Genius!!!! Write more!!!TEN OF TEN!!! YOU KICK ASSSSSS!!!!!! |
| 2005-04-07 17:43:26 | Forbidden Desires - Part 4 | from the first to second paragraph there is no transition, the writer is supposed to clue in the reader that we are entering her brain not sit there confused trying to figure it out. Bad lead! I notice the rating is 8.5, nothing is rated 8.5 for long, especially a story whose first two parts are rated around a 6. Stop fucking voting for your own story to get it ranked high. Let the readers put it there if it deserves it. |