| 2006-08-20 17:12:29 |
Wife's Night Out - Part 3
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I like your newer stories better but this was a good one. |
| 2006-09-17 16:04:58 |
Wife's Night Out - Part 3
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Great story, but I don't like the violence. Other people might like it so keep on writing. I have now read all your stories and I think you are the best porn writer ever!. |
| 2007-04-10 18:12:15 |
Wife's Night Out - Part 3
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thyank you kimi, for all of ure stories. i read each and every one in ure author profile, and gave every one a 10/10. i love u kimi. thank u for all the entertaining { as well as nut draining } stories. just think what u would look like if u were to swallow all of the cum that was shot by people reading ure stories. my god, u would never have to eat any solid food again. ure sole food group would be cum. but to get at the cream filling u have to eat the meat. so dont become a vegetarian { cumatarian,yes } on us yet. just think, if u were stranded on an island with very little food, all u would have to do is let eric { ure hubby} eat the food and as long as u can get him hard enough to cum in ure mouth then u can eat too. but if u cant get him off, u dont eat lol lol ,lol. |
| 2005-04-12 02:09:52 |
Discovery of a new desire
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Interesting, but your grammar and detail need a bit of attention, still decent for a first try though! BTW where'd James end up? |
| 2005-04-13 14:42:40 |
Discovery of a new desire
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good story but reading about blushing over 4 times is boring and i don't belive you that it is a real story 5/10 |