| 2005-06-08 17:44:06 |
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Had to try a little moral for this story at the end, eh? |
| 2005-08-27 13:31:15 |
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Not exactly a feel good ending, but still a very well developed story. I missed Part 1, but it seems the story was all pretty much in these last two editions anyway. It would have been nice to see Eric beat the shit out of DeShawn. You'd still have the not so feel good ending, but Eric would have his vengence, DeShawn would be punished (if only physically) for being the asshole that he is, and Kimi would still get what she deserved: being left out in the cold. Ehh, just a suggestion. Still a good story, so keep em comin! |
| 2005-10-12 23:27:26 |
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Great story!!!!!!! Kimi! You re just so great writer! Don't leave this site! Write more please!!!!!!!! |
| 2006-01-18 14:35:29 |
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fuck u loosers that story was hot. damn all the suggestions just read and enjoy.. good job please wrrite more |
| 2006-02-03 16:17:43 |
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10/10 AGAIN BABE |