| 2006-07-30 06:31:12 |
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Hmmm and me: She didn't suck his blood until before he finally came, and even if you began to suck blood then a male orgasm doesn't last that long, so he'd be done orgasming before he became soft, and the story said nothing about him still stiff after he orgasmed, so you're wrong. |
| 2006-08-09 06:03:08 |
Hungry
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Pale, dark hair, mmm yummy, I might bite her first. |
| 2006-08-23 04:00:15 |
Hungry
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....i still think its pretty good....... |
| 2006-08-23 07:47:56 |
Hungry
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Fantastic! What a way to go! You are a true wordsmith! |
| 2006-09-17 03:19:17 |
Hungry
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I loved it. Quite a change from your usual upbeat endings. Ashley Barbie (presumably a female) doesn't seem to realise that we read the story for its arousal effect. If I want literature I will look for it elsewhere. And I take no notice of the ratings because most of the folks are imbeciles anyway! |