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Comments from READER
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2008-04-19 12:33:13 | Daddy got Caught!! (better) | What a shame, even at the second attempt, you didn't take the time to REALLY erad wht you had written... There is the germ of a really good story here but, like so many others before you (and no doubt, still to come) an element of laziness has spoilt a promising contribution.... |
| 2005-04-13 13:16:55 | Hungry | Great! One of my fave fantasies. |
| 2005-04-21 21:26:53 | Hungry | yuck, this sucks big time, 3/10 and that is being generous |
| 2005-04-27 01:34:10 | Hungry | This was a change |
| 2005-05-14 12:46:11 | Hungry | hmm the whole premisis of it entices me but just to here him die on the shitter is pretty bad... i mean could he have at least not be fully drained? |