| 2005-11-05 15:51:06 |
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wow....I want to be Talis :) great story. |
| 2005-12-18 22:57:14 |
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Very good story. One of the best ones on this site. You need to work on proper diaglog grammar and better proofreading. Overall, an excellent read. Hot! |
| 2006-03-17 22:29:58 |
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This is great! |
| 2006-03-18 01:27:04 |
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ooo! very nice! And you really can write, I like how you don't use stupid slang. |
| 2007-10-08 14:17:39 |
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Well written. I love the style you use. |