| 2005-05-18 12:39:07 |
Ms J.
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Excellent story, keep up the good work, lol i wonder how many times you came when writing this story :D |
| 2005-05-18 15:33:24 |
Ms J.
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Good story, but I think the other perspective was unneccesary. |
| 2005-05-18 22:17:39 |
Ms J.
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This story has the right balance, which is something you don't see very often on this site. Very well written on all fronts. The double narrative was tricky and perhaps a little unnecessary, but it helps the narrative arc. A superior story. |
| 2005-05-18 22:45:46 |
Ms J.
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think there is some writer rating going on here |
| 2005-05-19 00:42:40 |
Ms J.
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Unlike "Crap" who has no penis, I thought your story was a wonderful addition to my favorite stories. I hope you continue to write such masterpeices. 10/10 |