| 2005-05-18 03:59:39 |
Numbers Game
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I tend to agree with all of these comments. The action seems rushed, particularly when compared to the intro. Thanks for the feedback, and I will definitely be congnisant of this in any future stories. |
| 2005-05-18 23:15:46 |
My first time with my mistress
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Needed to be longer |
| 2005-05-17 13:25:46 |
Ms J.
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VERY WELL WRITEN STORY , THE GRAMMER AND SPELLING WAS VERY GOOD AND THE CONTENT WAS BRILLIANT |
| 2005-05-17 13:47:55 |
Ms J.
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Hot juicy story:-))-- and finger lickin' good. Keep up the good work . u gotta 10 |
| 2005-05-17 18:14:27 |
Ms J.
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this was a great story |