| 2005-05-23 17:50:30 |
Scary dreams arn't so bad
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looks like the lunatic is in your head.. haha i love pink floyd. this story is ok not too good but not too bad. congratualtions, your mediocre! |
| 2005-05-24 04:34:18 |
Scary dreams arn't so bad
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I agree with foxxx. 6/10. but that was your fisrt story right? enough to get me hard. good enough. |
| 2005-05-24 06:26:07 |
Scary dreams arn't so bad
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i was just able to take my cream out ,whoaaa.... |
| 2005-05-24 17:38:33 |
Scary dreams arn't so bad
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others just don't understand people like us... T_T i bet the author can rp good... ^_~ |
| 2005-05-24 19:07:22 |
Scary dreams arn't so bad
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I liked it, but this had allot of potential for more character development, before the sex. |