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Comments from READER
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2005-05-25 02:25:40 | Scary dreams arn't so bad | This was alright but I agree w/ some of the others you need more detail and have her not say Taylor-kun so much-that started bugging the shit outta me. Anyways, you should make a part 2 but w/ more detail on their past and make it a little more romantic. Don't you think the 8th grade is a little young? |
| 2005-05-25 15:39:46 | Scary dreams arn't so bad | kudos on the band choice. . . . .but they talk like five-year-olds. Space out paragraphs, don't be in such a hurry. And first time anal sex really fucking hurts the chick. Can I emphasize how much? so next time don't do such a sloppyass job. 4/10. |
| 2005-05-25 19:39:33 | Scary dreams arn't so bad | I liked it! |
| 2005-05-25 19:47:23 | Scary dreams arn't so bad | -sniff- I thank you all for constructive crittisism!!! I dunno what rp means, but ok. 8th grade isn't too young to be in love! I'M MEDICORE!!! WAHOO!! Wait that's bad..... |
| 2005-05-26 07:48:50 | Scary dreams arn't so bad | Taylor-kun? You can tell you are young and the story kinda creeped me out. |