| 2005-05-28 08:15:59 |
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Good story. I liked that the sex was mutual, not just one guy doing all the stuff to the other. It shows a relationship rather than just dominating sex. As for grammer and spelling: check yours. You have either inserted "adn" into your spell checker or are not using one at all. 9/10 |
| 2005-05-28 09:23:46 |
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HAHA! My fault! ADN stands for Associates Degree in Nursing. So I'm going to change that in the spell checker otherwise when I make an inversion I'm going to look like a douche. Thats for pointing that out. :-D |
| 2005-05-28 12:23:05 |
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This is a great story. Especially the part with the strand of hair in front of his eyes. That is sexy, and them falling asleep together to. |
| 2005-05-29 17:36:59 |
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Godd stohry. thu grammer kouldve ben bettere, and yer addishions and subtracshions could be better |
| 2005-06-01 23:08:41 |
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That was a great story! Write the sequel! |