| 2005-05-25 01:47:16 |
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I like your story but I have to agree w/ "insane's" comment that the sex should be more detailed and you should make it a little more complicated but please don't include the wife or husband in the sex that would just make this story suck! You got a "warning" for rating your own story or is that just some moron being an asshole? |
| 2005-05-25 03:30:45 |
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Thanks for the comments, I appreciate the feedback. I assume it was a moron being an asshole StrawberryTease. Foldom Dehtri. I'll stop writing when you learn to spell. Thanks again for the comments. |
| 2005-05-25 17:52:43 |
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a nice story with beautiful words |
| 2005-05-25 18:13:24 |
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Nice story. Ignore all the assholes, nobody gets warnings for rating their own stories...look forward to part 2! |
| 2005-05-26 03:42:15 |
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Very routine |