| 2005-06-01 21:39:07 |
The day my aunty caught me
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Spelling, grammar, spacing... pretty rough. |
| 2005-06-02 08:38:19 |
The day my aunty caught me
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Get your english teacher to check it over. |
| 2005-06-02 09:20:17 |
The day my aunty caught me
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Learn to spell, maybe get your aunty to check after you fuck her |
| 2005-06-04 17:36:10 |
The day my aunty caught me
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I couldn't finish reading the first paragraph. How can anybody be so lousy at spelling. Terrible. It ruined the story. |
| 2005-06-06 07:42:33 |
The day my aunty caught me
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where the fuck are all these brain-dead mother-fuckers coming from'' nice premise for a story'had lots of potential and promise |