2005-07-19 18:32:39 |
72 Hours of Lust - Part one
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I have read better but that wasn't all that bad. looking forward to the other installments. |
2006-01-05 00:21:55 |
72 Hours of Lust - Part one
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a bit lower than par by my books, but ok nonetheless. 7/10 |
2005-05-31 10:07:23 |
The day my aunty caught me
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you're 16 alright. |
2005-05-31 12:29:54 |
The day my aunty caught me
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This is absolutley the worst. Try reading your story before you send it off to post it. |
2005-05-31 13:03:41 |
The day my aunty caught me
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You will *always* get low ratings if you cannot even spell simple words like with and laid. Try again, run it through a spellcheaker or something! |