| 2005-07-17 08:32:33 |
Kimmie's Fantasy 1
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keep it coming that was good =] |
| 2005-07-17 08:49:44 |
Kimmie's Fantasy 1
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laid out well but extremely shoddy storyline. no action, only description. u def'nitely gotta drop this n get something else in its place |
| 2005-07-17 09:44:32 |
Kimmie's Fantasy 1
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I,I,I. To many I's. 4/10 |
| 2005-07-17 18:00:31 |
Kimmie's Fantasy 1
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Good Story! 10/10 Write another one... maybe of you your brother and your friend joanne! |
| 2005-07-18 03:48:59 |
Kimmie's Fantasy 1
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that was dom perignon right? good stories |