| 2005-07-21 22:03:06 |
Kimmie's Fantasy 1
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Heather you wrote a good story,,,,,more people than you know are into fucking their sisters mothers and father's These cocksuckers that are putting down your story are probable more involved in that than you know good job gal 10/10 |
| 2005-07-22 16:09:52 |
Kimmie's Fantasy 1
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PRETTY GOOD EROTICA................ |
| 2005-07-22 22:44:39 |
Kimmie's Fantasy 1
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THAT WAS FUCKING AWFUL...god.....i just wanted all of them to SHUT UP and fuck allready! your dialogue was for shit! u get a ZERO |
| 2005-07-24 22:39:18 |
Kimmie's Fantasy 1
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I thought it was ok...The dialog was good, And made it rub one off! ...Good Job! |
| 2005-07-25 20:28:30 |
Kimmie's Fantasy 1
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I didnt read anything except the end bit. the long bit with the sex in. it was really good..made me cum.....not bad. 8/10 |