| 2005-07-26 08:03:33 |
Kimmie's Fantasy 1
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its too lengthy but still good make stories good but short. happy fucking brothers |
| 2005-07-28 11:12:28 |
Kimmie's Fantasy 1
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JOHN COULD HAVE STARTED FUCKING KIM ON THE PORCH WHEN THEY WERE YOUNGER. EVEN THOUGH HE ONLY HAD A 7" COCK, HER LITTLE VIRGIN CUNT WOULD HAVE BEEN HAPPY TO ACCEPT ITS FUCKING ALL NIGHT LONG. SINCE HER PARENTS WERE LETTING THEM SLEEP TOGETHER, THEY WOULD HAVE PROBABLY JOINED IN. LITTLE KIMMIE WOULD HAVE ENJOYED FUCKING HER DAD AND EATING HER MOM WHILE JOHN FUCKED HER CUNT AND ASS. JOHN WOULD ALSO HAVE ENJOYED FUCKING HIS DAD'S ASS, SUCKING HIS DAD'S COCK AND EATING HIS CUM WHILE KIM AND MOM SUCKED JOHN'S COCK AND BALLS AND FED HIM THEIR CUNTS FOR HIM TO LICK AND MAKE CUM. BROTHERS AND SISTERS SHOULD SUCK AND FEEL EACH OTHERS COCKS, TITS AND CUNTS UNTIL ONE OF THEM IS 10. THEN THEY SHOULD START FUCKING EACH OTHER AS OFTEN AS POSSIBLE. |
| 2005-07-29 15:44:52 |
Kimmie's Fantasy 1
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Parts great, parts good, parts too formulaic; parts very well written - some needing edits - good dialogue. Just the right length when I took your advice. The incest wasn't necessary - a boyfriend would have been just as great. Like your work! |
| 2005-07-30 12:37:52 |
Kimmie's Fantasy 1
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meh. Incest... |
| 2005-07-30 18:13:21 |
Kimmie's Fantasy 1
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Heather, this is a great story. It is the best that I have read on this web site. I was an older child and never knew the closeness that siblings can feel. I fathered three girls and two boys and am now a great grandfather. I have never considered incest, myself, but can realize the closeness that brothers and sisters can feel. Incest aside, the whole story that relates the true love feelings and the resultant sexual experience is the most well written and well understood tale in life. Thanks !!!! |