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Comments from READER
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2007-10-27 14:16:21 | To reader of 7/8 - try the author index. | |
| 2005-08-12 10:11:41 | Stockroom --- part II | Not bad, slow down a little. Use the discriptive language a little more and give the characters a little more voice. Avoid stereotyping by throwing in a little humor or a flaw or two. Try to make the first sex a little akward, so they have room to grow. Keep writing. |
| 2005-08-12 10:16:42 | Stockroom --- part II | Odd, i do not recall leaving the feedback at both stories. However I do not have much new to say except that writing out vocalizations (AAARRRGGGHHH!) is kinda amaturish. Describe the moans and groans instead. Keep on trucking girl. |
| 2005-08-12 11:30:12 | Stockroom --- part II | Holy Cow...Aint no shame in yer game...awesome!! |
| 2005-08-12 17:02:37 | Stockroom --- part II | i dont care whate these ppl said, great story, keep writing! |