| 2006-03-10 05:54:50 |
Lil' charlie and The Bathroom Door
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nice |
| 2006-10-07 02:14:59 |
Lil' charlie and The Bathroom Door
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Haha, Dude, It kind of sucked, you could have put more effort into it, A stories not a story unless the reader feels the story. not bad though, just bit more work. |
| 2007-01-09 18:13:15 |
Lil' charlie and The Bathroom Door
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Oh the warm piss flowing over her body, keep it comming |
| 2008-04-18 02:29:31 |
Lil' charlie and The Bathroom Door
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what a waste of time to read this crap |
| 2005-08-12 18:42:43 |
Lil' charlie in The Woods
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ok... not everyones cup of tea i suppose. quite good it parts but improve grammar |