| 2005-08-21 16:46:59 |
Sally My Niece, My down fall
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That was not quite the ending I wanted to see but I did start getting a heads up regarding the cameras. As I had said in a previous story you wrote, I would have like to see Sally and Alex both annouce to him that he had impregnated them and that they were going to carry and give birth to his babies. |
| 2005-08-21 17:30:03 |
Sally My Niece, My down fall
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The ending was quite surprising but it's a good ending Mark getting caught by the cops and all showing that sex with minors even if it's a fantasy it's still illegal i loved the series and the stories its not every story where there's actually a storyline so i have no bad comments and keep up the good writing |
| 2005-08-22 09:03:24 |
Sally My Niece, My down fall
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The ending was for Shock Value and I see that it worked. There are more stories on this site about having sex with minors. This was merely my take on it. I've written 2 more short stories that should be posted soon, and I have plans on another series. I hope that all found something that they liked about the series. You can't please all of the people all of the time. Happy reading. |
| 2005-08-22 09:08:18 |
Sally My Niece, My down fall
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I enjoyed the entire thing. Don't let the people who give you a hard time about the ending worry you. I think an interesting ending is the most difficult part of any story. If a story doesn't end with bodily fluids, many of this site's readers have trouble with it. You are doing fine work, so feel free to write some more therapy any time for us. |
| 2005-08-22 11:48:58 |
Sally My Niece, My down fall
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all i wanted was more of the girls daring each other to suck and jerk Mark off'that was the hottest parts of this series |