| 2005-08-23 02:31:10 |
Sally My Niece, My down fall
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Awesome story, I liked it till the end. Never believe someone when they say you are not a good writer. By the way that was the most interesting ending i have read on this website. good luck with your future writings.............. |
| 2005-08-23 13:57:57 |
Sally My Niece, My down fall
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the begining was better...the last 2 sucked |
| 2005-08-23 15:33:02 |
Sally My Niece, My down fall
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love the ending |
| 2005-08-23 18:53:59 |
Sally My Niece, My down fall
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ah... the truth comes out... this guy doesnt like petaphiles |
| 2005-08-23 18:58:43 |
Sally My Niece, My down fall
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Stories were hot but only because i could have these girls as my girlfriends, i loved the ending, because it is what a 40 year old would deserve. |