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Comments from READER
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2007-05-17 20:29:59 | Take Your Kid To Work Day | damn what a hot slut. such a good fuck. what a nasty whore taking it up her ass like that. and only 14 yrs old. man this story was hot. i loved it. 8/10 because of the shit thing, but without that it would have been 10/10 |
| 2007-05-25 14:51:37 | Take Your Kid To Work Day | Okay, I'm going to read your story. Hot Girl.......Bannana.......sl... Dance.......Boobs.......and... what?!? She ate your shit. Holy Crap!!! That's fucking wrong and crazy!!!!!! Dude, I know it's your first story and all, but i mean come on!! You don't make a girl eat your own shit man. That is wrong and....... **vomits on keyboard** I hope your happy, now I have to get a new keyboard because of you!!!!!! 3/10 + $30 for keyboard |
| 2007-06-10 23:52:52 | Take Your Kid To Work Day | hhahahahahahahahaah yooo...hold up....she..ATE your shit?...hahahahahahahahahah... i cant even get over that man...10/10 for creativity ;p hhahahahahahahahah |
| 2005-09-06 09:21:17 | Carol_(2) | Not a very enjoyable story. One thing I have noticed about XNXX is that all the woman hating peckerheads seem to gravitate here. The story was very formulaic, the dialogue was primative, and the descriptions of sex were typical of someone who has never actually been laid. On the up side the story was structurally sound and the language was clear. Not a great effort though, keep trying. |
| 2005-09-06 09:53:34 | Carol_(2) | I have to agree with Archaic - this was not an enjoyable read - tone it down - you have a good start but it gets too unbelievable. |