| 2005-11-22 14:36:14 |
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YA NICE WOOT ANOTHER!!! |
| 2005-11-22 21:42:39 |
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horrible... no plot it was another homo story |
| 2005-11-22 23:38:04 |
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took me back 45 yrs to my first teenage sexual encounter. well written and needs a follow-up |
| 2005-11-23 01:16:16 |
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amazing wrting style...beautiful piece of literature, even if it weren't a sex story. It conveys teenage emotion so well. |
| 2005-11-23 06:56:48 |
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Well, what can I say. That was amazing, I enjoyed the personal thoughts throughout the story, the fact that the male didn't know what he was doing and most of all the beginning hesitation on the females part. I'm sure this hits home for alot of people out there and almost everyone in some way can relate |