| 2005-11-30 17:01:25 |
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Wow, definately a 9.9978/10 geuss thats close enough, The writing is definately better than alot of what I have seen on here and the story and detail are excelent.. I hope to see more. |
| 2005-12-01 11:57:36 |
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excelent right from the build up to the body to the near end and to the end i love it. kudos!!!
10/10 |
| 2005-12-01 22:37:26 |
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simply awesome, 1 of the best. 10/10 |
| 2005-12-02 16:14:43 |
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Simply Awsome. You Spelled tit wrong. |
| 2005-12-02 16:45:32 |
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truly awsome story 11/10 |