| 2006-08-22 19:50:21 |
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Excellent story, made me come. |
| 2006-08-28 15:52:03 |
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Too innocent, needs more detail 7/10 |
| 2006-09-04 16:29:59 |
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I thought it was just right. The use of words fit the thought patterns of the main players. Very well done. Please continue the story. |
| 2006-09-07 06:06:27 |
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Thanks for all the comments - I guess they show you can't please everyone & thanks for th10 scores from my loyal fans - that's always a thrill - & thanks EW for defending the story. |
| 2006-10-06 13:01:08 |
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superb, as usual. |