| 2005-09-20 23:58:24 |
The Polish Girl
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not that good. 5/10 |
| 2005-09-23 21:28:34 |
The Polish Girl
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Keep it up (sic) Liked the story, waiting for the next part, pant, pand |
| 2005-09-25 06:37:29 |
The Polish Girl
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Not bad for a real story. |
| 2005-09-27 13:34:11 |
The Polish Girl
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Eh. Sorry, I didnt like it that much. The dialogue was mediocre. The sex was boring and the set up was pretty thin. So what if she has large labia, I mean get real, having to wear a maxi to hide the labes? There was some good detail in there but it was poorly placed. What straight guy can actually identify the components of perfume? writing out vocalizations works in comic strips, but it is lazy in real fiction. By the way, didn't most of the immigrant sweat shops close in the 1950s? Keep trying. |
| 2005-09-29 05:37:21 |
The Polish Girl
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Dialogue was pretty crappy, like the lowest class porn 5/10 |