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Comments from READER
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2005-09-28 00:50:01 | Coming Together | My personal opinion, your story needs more emotion. For me it reads; He said that, I said this. He did this, I did that. Who felt what? If you don’t feel, your reader’s won’t either. |
| 2006-01-29 22:25:26 | Coming Together | It is a he said she said story, It was a fantasy. |
| 2007-01-09 17:52:11 | Coming Together | Too short |
| 2007-09-04 17:06:36 | Coming Together | Sorry its so short but again it was just a fantasy. Take it as it is, you just might see it used later with Michael and Silky... The Author |
| 2007-10-07 00:13:37 | Coming Together | This was a fantasy that was written by both myself and Master Michael. We planned to make it reality and sort of finally did. |