| 2005-11-06 17:11:59 |
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it was quite a bit overdone, and completely unrealistic. also, i think it wouldve been a little better if you didnt make her sound so plain. |
| 2005-11-26 09:49:24 |
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1/10 |
| 2005-12-01 07:43:03 |
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Go Take a jump in a metal smelting furnance. yes that is where you belong |
| 2006-02-20 21:49:10 |
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The ending was bad the rape was good ending was completely unrealistic no fight put up no one would shove a knife in their chest. |
| 2006-02-28 20:48:57 |
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wow you guys who are flaming this guy are assholes. This guy probably isn't as fucked up as the man in the story so chill the fuck out. Also if you don't want to read a story about psychos and death then WHY THE FUCK DID YOU CLICK ON THE TOPIC? |