| 2005-10-09 16:48:57 |
The poker game surprise
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Beer...not bear..bear are like grizzlies...and use more paragraphs |
| 2005-10-23 06:05:12 |
The poker game surprise
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Would like to read follow up of at Toms house but needs tidying has its hard to keep your place, more paragraphs 6/10 |
| 2005-10-28 23:56:43 |
The poker game surprise
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Its a new paragraph when a character speaks. |
| 2005-10-31 23:41:25 |
The poker game surprise
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That was the longest piece of shit that I've ever read. 1/10 |
| 2005-11-09 02:51:18 |
The poker game surprise
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every woman fantasizes about a gang bang but probably wouldn't get the nerve up. they should read this story. made my cunt wet and horny and needing a good hard fucking. |