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Comments from READER
Date | Story title | Comment |
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2006-03-07 15:07:41 | Power at Its Finest | Your story might have been better receved if you had gone over how you got your power. and your first kill not just some random one. This would have shown you realizing what your powers were, and added some depth to the chars. |
2006-03-07 15:39:22 | Power at Its Finest | oh yes and how your powers worked. |
2006-07-01 23:34:59 | Power at Its Finest | Whats wrong with getting off on violence you sexual pacifists are pathetic I love to make my slave bleed. I get off on it and so does she she sex is boring unless someone bleeds blood by the way makes a great lubricant try it sometime |
2007-04-10 13:51:52 | Power at Its Finest | tis sucks noting to read about wat the point of killing here 0/10 |
2007-12-19 21:03:27 | Power at Its Finest | wellllllllll i made about 2 paragraphs then i said fuck this |