| 2006-04-13 17:43:31 |
A Peasant Girl - Chapter 9
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when are you going to write the end??? |
| 2006-08-03 22:58:46 |
A Peasant Girl - Chapter 9
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It's been a busy year so far, which is why Anna and Noor haven't gotten the attention they deserve. However, Part 10 has been submitted, and I'm working on Part 11. |
| 2007-08-13 19:37:32 |
A Peasant Girl - Chapter 9
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Getting better |
| 2005-10-07 11:19:57 |
College Library
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True story huh? I think I read about this true story on a VHS box at the video store one time. There are about as many trues stories at xnxx as there are innocent men in prison. the action progressed fairly predictably. By predictable I mean cliche and unrealistic. C cups are not 'huge', but if you got your sex ed at this site you might think they were. Try double spacing between sentences, and proofread a little for pete's sake. Decent, not great, good effort though. Keep trying. |
| 2005-10-07 13:53:02 |
College Library
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personaly...i thought it was horrible..even though u got 7.5... probably some dumb 12 year-olds you have alot of spelling mistakes and your grammer sucks....try again next story. |