| 2005-09-29 19:49:03 |
My Wife 1
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very average story line ...... and absolutely horrible spelling --- from an Englishman, yet. |
| 2005-09-30 14:38:44 |
My Wife 1
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I found it okay, but as for being TRUE well that i am not so sure of ?? 6/10 |
| 2005-09-30 18:35:35 |
My Wife 1
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great story, loved it |
| 2005-10-01 04:18:59 |
My Wife 1
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Savor my juices? deep south = heavy clothes? there were a lot of inconsistancies, and a lot of holes (not the good kind). It was well structured and readable, but it was not a very good turn for an old familier formula. |
| 2005-10-01 06:12:26 |
My Wife 1
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loved the story,got my cock harder than a rock ,came three times reading it, |