2005-10-03 05:08:26 |
My WIfe 2
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Better than part one; it looks like someone proofread this one, but not very well. The action was believable, but the transtion from Chris to Cindy being "I" was awkward. Cindy's dialogue needed to be marked out better. |
2005-10-04 04:32:25 |
My WIfe 2
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Fantastic so hot and sexy and it had me on edge of my seat with anticipsation.I just loved it and want more please |
2005-10-15 17:59:37 |
My WIfe 2
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Great so far... hope you continue your story. |
2005-11-23 22:50:33 |
My WIfe 2
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This story sucked major ass. It was very difficult to follow at first, but the more I read, the more it bacame very predictable. Many typos and you have no concept of grammer. |
2005-12-13 13:22:16 |
My WIfe 2
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again, a very good story |