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Comments from READER
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2005-10-06 02:13:15 | Crystal Ridge 1 | Your use of the English language could use some work, there were mstks enuf to notice, and i did. But, as mi name says, i enjoyed it. r |
| 2005-10-06 13:09:44 | Crystal Ridge 1 | Very fun story line. I can't wait to read the sequel. Thank you. |
| 2005-10-06 17:24:45 | Crystal Ridge 1 | What the hell do you think you are doing! was that a plot? here? my god man, the pitchfork and torch bearing mobs will string you up. This is xnxx, the home of boring reptition of cliche sex acts. All kidding aside,it was a very well written story. The charecter development was superb especially the main man. First person is a little limiting for a story like this (you have to stay with your guy instead of visiting the wandering psycho). You may want to look into your comma use on the first couple of paragraphs. It seemed like you really got rolling as the story progressed. Good job, well done, keep writing. |
| 2005-10-06 18:37:41 | Crystal Ridge 1 | Not Bad. I've read quite a few stories on this site in my time and I haven't found many that have so much as a storyline to follow. From the looks of things however, you have the makings of a well done series. Nice job and keep it up. |
| 2005-10-06 19:49:41 | Crystal Ridge 1 | Can i just say that George is one of the best authors on here! Plots do help to make the story! Who wants to read " yeah i saw her , we ripped our clothes off , I fucked her brains out ,and never saw her again! THE END, George is very eliaborate on his stories -he makes this girl cum everytime i read them! I luv ya George can't wait for the sequel. |