| 2005-10-10 18:34:07 |
Crystal Ridge 1
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i would like to read what happens tomorrow ery well written a pleasure to read |
| 2005-10-10 23:33:12 |
Crystal Ridge 1
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nicely written, i'd like to read more 10/10 |
| 2005-10-11 05:53:41 |
Crystal Ridge 1
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I liked it very much! Please more! |
| 2005-10-11 16:37:09 |
Crystal Ridge 1
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Great stuff! It ended at just the right time for you to do a sequel. Well planned out. I think you're up there with the guy who wrote "The Camp Nurse" sries |
| 2005-10-16 11:32:15 |
Crystal Ridge 1
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very good. sex could have been more detailed but still very good |