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| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2006-09-22 19:58:32 | babysitting my babysister | My first thought was to give a fledgling writer some help with his first work, however I would advise you to find other interests, like mugging eighty-year-old ladies. Hopefully you would be caught and sent away from the rest of us. Is it that difficult to write a complete word like the word “you”? You wrote, “IF U LIKE THE CONTINUATION OF THESE PUT IT IN THE COMMENTS SO I CUOLD TELL IT TO YOU.” No I don’t like “these”. Please make your first time, your last and don’t write anything more difficult than a grocery list. Before mom and dad (left or departed not) leaved the house? When you say frat-mates, I’m reasonably sure you are not referring to college buddies, as there is no way in hell you have been in any college, unless it was to deliver a pizza. You should show your story to your pa |
| 2006-09-28 21:55:15 | babysitting my babysister | learn to spell and grow up. the story was so backwards and forward hard to try to follow. couldn't even finish it. sucks |
| 2006-10-13 00:19:23 | babysitting my babysister | sister, cousin, daughters too. If you gat one of then you just don't need to go out and get a girlfriend. then again you might be so ugly you have to fuck at home. And the sluts you fuck well I have too and the girls from the mobile home park too. |
| 2006-12-14 01:15:20 | babysitting my babysister | He's Fucking 17 years old Why does he need a Baby sitter??!?!?!?!?!?! |
| 2007-02-27 23:42:23 | babysitting my babysister | this is for the dude who commented under me. "CAN U FUCKING READ"? it says baby sister. well anyway great story, i want the continuation. plz |