| 2005-11-18 02:50:46 |
The Enslavement Of Raven
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THis is the worst slave story i have ever read dont write any more this is horrid writing |
| 2005-11-21 01:01:25 |
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What was that? 1/10 |
| 2006-09-22 15:12:53 |
The Enslavement Of Raven
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its was ok i guess, could do better. 2/10 |
| 2006-10-25 01:23:32 |
The Enslavement Of Raven
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For an 18 year old I guess it was ok,keep working at it. |
| 2007-10-11 18:37:09 |
The Enslavement Of Raven
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this is not the worst story i have read it could be better but keep working at |