| 2005-10-18 05:09:26 |
An Aussie Girl Who Loves An American – True Story
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Great story , well written, but could have had less length to the paragraphs. Strong but beleiavable. Sounds like a lady that bought a camera from me some time back.. |
| 2005-10-18 13:17:22 |
An Aussie Girl Who Loves An American – True Story
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FANTASTIC!!!!! |
| 2005-10-18 15:22:18 |
An Aussie Girl Who Loves An American – True Story
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that was a pretty hot story.keep writing more..... 10/10 |
| 2005-10-18 18:44:26 |
An Aussie Girl Who Loves An American – True Story
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Great, and i couldnt tell if there were ANY misspellings, i was to involved in the movie in my head while reading! |
| 2005-10-18 22:49:10 |
An Aussie Girl Who Loves An American – True Story
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A+ just spread out the paragraphs a little more - it makes it easier to read. |