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Comments from READER
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2005-10-19 23:11:26 | An Aussie Girl Who Loves An American – True Story | fuck me, that was hottttttttttt, this chick knows how to write, wish it was me, i would love to have two huge hard and hot cocks in me, lucky bitch 10/10 x zillion, write more please. |
| 2005-10-19 23:36:53 | An Aussie Girl Who Loves An American – True Story | Do you do anus excercises or something? Colonic rupture is not very sexy. It sure must be nice dating a guy who can come five times in one evening. |
| 2005-10-19 23:58:55 | An Aussie Girl Who Loves An American – True Story | "I don't like your sentence structure" is an opinion. "You have terrible sentence structure" is a fact. 20 dependent and independent clauses strung together with commas is not easy to read. I kept rushing to the ends of paragraphs just so I could breathe. Your ex needs a name. The sex was really hot, and that redeemed this story mostly, but it needs a good bit of work. |
| 2005-10-20 01:47:12 | An Aussie Girl Who Loves An American – True Story | thats the shit, instructor is an idiot, like she said, it's the story, not the phrasing,nobody needs a english lesson, idiot, that story was fucking hot, can't wait to see more of ur staff hotgal, i pulled my cock through it all and blew all over the place, fucking hot. |
| 2005-10-20 02:24:46 | An Aussie Girl Who Loves An American – True Story | Loved it, you are a very good, writer and the way everything is expressed is magnificent. Much better than the average "then he fucked me" stories. Absolutely 10/10 |