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Comments from READER
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2005-10-29 13:57:13 | daddy's and my secret | very good for a frist try, don't give up because of the assholes. more detail would be good. I'd very much like to see more from you. And don't worry about the critics, thay probable can't even tie there own shoes. Keep trying. |
| 2005-10-30 10:45:11 | daddy's and my secret | Was ok but the spelling....please work on |
| 2005-10-30 13:15:43 | daddy's and my secret | Your story is not so bad, don't listen Conch or the others critics, probably they couldn't write much better either. The idea, the story line is very exciting, but like Hammer Time said you need to be more explicit. The grammar - sucks!, there you need to work hard, if you like to keep writting. |
| 2005-10-30 18:04:04 | daddy's and my secret | This is a GOOD start but a little short. Don't be discouraged by the few negative comments. Those jerks can't do as well as you or they would be writing. You'll improve with pratice. |
| 2005-10-30 22:15:24 | daddy's and my secret | this is just a fuck story, who gives a shit if the spelling is not perfect. who gives a shit if the grammar is not is not perfect ! just a fuck story! |