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| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2005-10-31 21:08:13 | daddy's and my secret | hot. write more. i don't love the rape aspect, but do your thing. just keep writing |
| 2005-11-01 12:40:22 | daddy's and my secret | The story wasn't terrible, but it wasn't all that great, either. You do need to work on grammer and spelling and also capitalization. Those are important if you want people to take your writing seriously. If you have a simple spell checker, that will help a lot, but nothing beats just proofing it yourself. One thing that helps is after you write it, let it sit for about a week, then read it again. Enlarge the magnification when you proof so it's easier to identify typo's. That is, if you care how well it's done when you post it. If not, then yeah, just disregard all of this. -S- |
| 2005-11-01 19:36:14 | daddy's and my secret | good story im not into the dog thing but rape i am so it was good keep writing |
| 2005-11-02 14:42:07 | daddy's and my secret | i wana fuck u and ur dawg |
| 2005-11-03 10:50:03 | daddy's and my secret | quiet good more please the sooner the better |