| 2006-05-26 16:27:09 |
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After reading your coach stories, i think this is a little weak. continue with the slutty desperate housewife, and change the name to Ashley Barbie (that's me). hee hee. |
| 2006-05-28 00:44:03 |
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well the reason i made the charcter be seduced soo easily is becuase rumer as it vampiers are able to hypmotize there victoms so i went with that but anyone with any ideas feel free to e-mail me or im me..(js391987 aol com and my sn is the same |
| 2006-11-23 17:14:59 |
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pretty good, the vamp theme is a nice classic.. |
| 2007-03-24 06:02:35 |
My Vampire Mistress
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I enjoyed the story a lot. The poor grammar and spelling wore on me a bit, however. If you could clean up your use of the English language, you would be a far better author, in my opinon. Thanks. Vampires Rock! I gave you a 6 in homage to our father below {666}! Keep writing, Man. You have talent. Sequel: Please. |
| 2008-02-12 10:06:42 |
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