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Comments from READER
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2005-11-24 20:14:17 | My new sister | Hot story, Vallydude, but where on God's green earth did you go to school? Your miserable spelling nearly ruined the sexy tale. 5/10 |
| 2005-11-25 00:33:11 | My new sister | That guy before me is right. Your spelling nearly made me go limp by itself. |
| 2005-11-25 00:44:06 | My new sister | Well, at least the author was up front about the fact that it was just a "fuck story". Even for that the action was rushed and without much detail. No emotion, no description of pleasure; it was mostly a play-by-play about two nymphomaniacs and a penis. It's a good start, but it still needs a lot of work. The story reads like a rough draft. |
| 2005-11-25 03:46:01 | My new sister | more more more |
| 2005-11-25 06:22:31 | My new sister | "TO BE CONTINUED" -- DON'T BOTHER. |