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Comments from READER
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2005-11-26 16:49:37 | My new sister | Most of u r complete twats, spelling ain't important and anyway, give him sum slack, he's probably American, none of them can spell 10/10 Valleydude, u rock : ) |
| 2005-11-26 23:29:25 | My new sister | Seriously, how hard is it for people to plug these things in to microsoft word? That and you used me in the place my at least twice and how does a person mix up flour and floor? I mean really, a good story, but a little grammar please, bad grammar in erotic lit is like when chicks make wierd faces in bukkake porn, total mood killer. |
| 2005-11-27 00:31:14 | My new sister | It just wasnt well written. it may be "just a fuck story" but it felt like i was watching the shit movie "Kingdom of Heaven" all over again. you need a better storyline, better plot development, better dialogue, better description of events, better charactars. fuck it...you need better everything! dont even bother writing another one! 1/10 |
| 2005-11-27 03:28:05 | My new sister | kingdom of heaven heh heh...anyway kinda on the fence with this story, if i rate it now it will be a 5. ill read it again in a few and rate it then. spelling and grammer do add to a story, nice to have but often missed. keep writing and it all gets better. thanks for the story in any case. |
| 2005-11-27 07:59:53 | My new sister | It was ok, but you can't hold on a K it would be fuuuuck not fuckkkk |