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Comments from READER
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2005-11-28 07:36:57 | My new sister | i liked it and hurry parts 2 and beyond and bring in Keyy's little 14yr.old girlfriend for a sleep-over'where they play spin the bottle and dare one another to go into mom's room and play with her tits and cunt while she's sleeping''''remember voyuerism is the key to great stories |
| 2005-11-28 11:44:54 | My new sister | the imagery was good.but work on the plot and on your spellings.6/10. |
| 2005-11-29 13:09:22 | My new sister | Not Bad. |
| 2005-11-29 17:27:13 | My new sister | Yah-tay-hay, churchil, if you don't care for a 'story'. do not read it, and most importantly, remember which country you're living. and understand your freedom of choice, that is if you are a true american, so enjoy your life. You sound somewhat educated still, remember u.s.history. we true native's could not speak our own language. Have a good life. 10Fthrs have a good might see that That boat called the Mayflower. and if i recall my history I believe most of us are american's. |
| 2005-11-29 21:28:20 | My new sister | story was'nt too bad, but the spelling and the basic grammer any sixth grader should know would have made it much better |