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| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2006-02-07 00:53:39 | More Than Friends - part 2 | another good one |
| 2005-11-25 01:32:38 | More Than Friends - Part 3 | So close, and yet so far! There's so little lead up to the bi-curious part. She watches a porno, then almost immediately questions her cousin, who she barely knows, about lesbianism? Her cousin shoots her down immediately, then turns around and seduces her? The hot, sweaty lesbian sex was fun, but it lacked some of the chemistry that your heterosexual sex scenes had in the previous parts. |
| 2005-11-25 12:33:12 | More Than Friends - Part 3 | Sick 1/10 |
| 2005-11-25 18:05:29 | More Than Friends - Part 3 | A big +1 to what Dreamer said. I'm going to be entireley honest: this storyline went downhill from part 1. You proved that you were capable of great work with part 1, but either due to experimentation or something else, you lost it. As such, this gets a 6/10 for steamy lesbain action, although too many words and a lack of believability knock the score down quite a bit. I would suggest that, rather than going for a part 4, you start another story line. I'll be sure to keep my eyes open for it. |
| 2005-11-27 17:10:39 | More Than Friends - Part 3 | i agree this is the person that wrote the girls nextdoor so i think that he was experimenting to chill on him. also 2 wasnt that bad.7/10. start a new series or try to find a way to bring this one back |