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Comments from READER
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2005-12-18 18:06:56 | daddy's bad girl_(0) | i thought it was pretty good make it longer though :p |
| 2005-12-23 23:10:48 | daddy's bad girl_(0) | you really need to watch your spelling and punctuation....you should write in the FIRST person - not in the third person, as someone stated above. |
| 2005-12-31 17:25:35 | daddy's bad girl_(0) | im sure it was could but i couldnt read any of it |
| 2006-01-02 02:50:49 | daddy's bad girl_(0) | Actaully its written in the second person...format it better:P |
| 2006-01-16 14:17:48 | daddy's bad girl_(0) | u do realize u dont need ,,,,,,, for punctation. and you dont use commas to end a sentence, u use a period. there wasn't any bestiality, just sort of implied. i liked the point of view, u dont see it often. there wasn't any real exposition. there were spelling errors and grammer errors. use paragraphs. |