| 2006-03-02 01:41:06 |
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I thought it was pretty good need to add more paragraphs though but overall not bad its not everyday someone writes in 3rd person |
| 2006-04-08 13:46:18 |
daddy's bad girl_(0)
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how can anyone read that ? your spelling is horrible. |
| 2006-05-30 20:53:48 |
daddy's bad girl_(0)
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try to use microsoft word when writing, to correct ur spelling :) |
| 2006-07-01 03:24:04 |
daddy's bad girl_(0)
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it was ok but you need to work on your spelling try harder keep it up |
| 2006-07-10 17:32:46 |
daddy's bad girl_(0)
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The worst story I've ever read. Spelling, punctuation, structure were horrifying. Hard to read. |